The fic that you two write (apart or together) always feels like there's another level of conciousness to it.
All fic to a certain extent is Meta-literature, but here due to the premise, the way all three of them of are interacting on a sexual level that is only hinted at in the show, the Meta is felt that more strongly imo.

I also love the sparsity of the descriptions, the voices in the dialogues are so true. As are Jack's insights into his team and their insights into him. I love your interpretation of these beautiful people.