I admit I didn't get into the story in the 1st chapter. But after reading this part I can feel the flow and it's looking interesting! Torchwood is what has really made Gwen and Ianto what they are now and to be told it wasn't all real, I felt their frustrations more in this chapter. Good job both of you!
I like the Jack and Gwen conversation and how he gives her his hard facts of what he would have liked. I love the ending of Gwen and Ianto's fingers interlacing!
Am curious how the poly will work itself through in the span of 10 chapters (or however long this will come to be) as well as the politics of getting Torchwood back up. (I am now trying to combine poly and politics in my head to very weird results.)
I couldn't help but laugh at Ianto's thought of "he blamed Gwen". Made me think of ask_aboutcoffee's "I blame Gwen" tag.
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I like the Jack and Gwen conversation and how he gives her his hard facts of what he would have liked. I love the ending of Gwen and Ianto's fingers interlacing!
Am curious how the poly will work itself through in the span of 10 chapters (or however long this will come to be) as well as the politics of getting Torchwood back up. (I am now trying to combine poly and politics in my head to very weird results.)
I couldn't help but laugh at Ianto's thought of "he blamed Gwen". Made me think of ask_aboutcoffee's "I blame Gwen" tag.